In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building.
Do you agree or disagree?
I strongly agree with this notion that government should banned smoking in public places. If global warming is threat to our country hazardous environment is too a major concern. In this essay I will out numbers of factor, which in support of smoking should not be allowed and bane.
Individual should contribute to improve the quality of air rather than spoiling it by smoking. This will be beneficial for for society and human health also. For example since few months when I check weather update in phone it also tells me about the air quality.Cities who known for its climate like Shimla, Manali and chamba famous tourist places in Himachal Pradesh are sadly facing the issue of bad quality of air. Smoking is not only reason behind it, but yes are one of them. People should not smoke open areas like market, movie theaters etc. People from different age roam in these places. Smoking is injurious to health is a well known slogan. However even though multitude didn't pay an attention towards it.
Chain-smoker are the one who never see a place where they should smoke. In spite of this it can be something dangerous to smoke indoor. For example, person who work in multi national company could not smoke inside the office or building. It would be beneficial for them and other to go out of the building. Reason being some time smoking can cause fire in office as many organization use computers for their work.So it would be great to avoid indoor smoking.
In this closure, I would say government should impose strict rule in country to prohibit smoking in country. However youth contribution is of great importance to promote this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83038869258 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42951300296 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.309189372 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9444444444 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249691466237 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824239780142 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635553177486 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150267586899 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377264045705 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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