In many countries, it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building.
Do you agree or disagree?
Although smoking in public places is nowadays illegal, it only fair that people who want to smoke ought to leave the building. And I totally disagree. To prevent them from smoking it has advantages but, its drawbacks are more, This essay will discuss the two main points of my opinion in more detail.
On one hand, The productivity of the employers will be reduced. Because Some buildings have their gate too much faraway from the employers' offices, which lead them to lose a lot of time as well as focus and attention. For example, the airport is considered one of the best companies, which allow the staff to smoke but in a specific isolated. That's why better to keep the work in its excel by allowing smokers to smoke in a ready place for them.
On the other hand, when you force your opinion on others, actually you don't help them at all. However smoking is a detrimental issue, but I believe that the government is the one whos responsible to guide and encourage them to stop this habit. In other words, one of the good techniques is to make awareness campaigns all over the streets, gangways, gardens and the schools. Thus, it is recommended to keep advising them not forcing them and worsen their problem.
In conclusion, Smoking is a bad habit and may start early in smoker's life by friends or family member. So we have to accept and respect them wish and try to support them as much as possible instead of tightening over them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to force'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60465116279 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44919533296 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6227771029 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180128574446 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622706951487 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981924543389 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114427917427 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833286465562 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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