You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 254 words
There is no doubt that media captures all negative reporting such as problems and emergencies instead of progressive news. Few people believe that the these kinds of trends can be harmful to the individuals or society, while many think otherwise. In this essay, I will discuss the points on the effects of media over society and present my view with the relevant examples.
On the one hand, the human gets more attention towards trending news, be it negative or positive. This is because media is the source of information among the democratic society and the audience happens to follow the media or journalists. Although the media covers the positive story, the human tends to attract negative stories. As per statistics, the popularity of such firms have risen due to the negative news reporting. For instance, the reality shows has more Telivision Rate compared to the News Channel. Additionally, the main problem is the choice of public who do not appreciate developmental stories.
On the other hand, there are ripple effects on an individual as well and the nation as a whole. National Sportsmen who win a medal at first place sometimes feel demotivated. As the civilians fails to applaud the developement and support them. Similarily, the country's developement is not taken by the people thereby leading to such slow progress. For instance, world's second best chess champion is not known by 80% of crowd in their own country as media is busy focusing on entertaining pieces. Moreover, celebrities or any person who has got a negative publicity can turn to be fatal. It is extremely sad to see such gaining revenue over preying such abrupt flashing news.
To conclude, I exteremly agree that it has become a trend these days to handle such disheartening strories rather than good news. Also this has become business by more victimising or harassing the victims which impacts on a mental health.
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...pared to the News Channel. Additionally, the main problem is the choice of public...
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...uch slow progress. For instance, worlds second best chess champion is not known by 80% of c...
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...rtening strories rather than good news. Also this has become business by more victim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02523659306 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76295316269 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2629045784 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179470366906 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485555048903 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416966064916 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108700907375 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493384612859 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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