WRITING TASK2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures.
Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?
Write at least 250 words.
The ideology that states that what’s seen with the eyes stays longer in the brain than what’s heard with the ear can’t be over emphasized. Although pictures often depict the information about news on television and papers around, however, other school of thought support the notion that these pictures speaks are efficient to utterance. This essay will discuss the ideology.
Irrespective of the validation of the school of thought about the images in the newspapers, it’s very evident that nothing bores the reader more than information without still pictures. Example of the such category depends on the nature of the reader, geographical location and interest of the targeted audience. Considering the temperament of such, a choleric temperament can would get bored so easily and impatient to follow up a such story from an information booklet due to no pictorial representation following the conveyed message. Another category considered are the who can’t follow a logical reasoning in the present days would have been futile effort if images are not been seen to capture type of information expected by the convener to them. Moreover information is a message that’s been passed across to different categories of people which include children. It very imperative that picture is effectively represented to catch their attention to get the desired message across to them for proper understanding of the information to b carried out. Although, this ideology has a limiting factors such as strong cognitive mind cant be exercised to understand abstract things.
Furthermore, an ideology that pictures ate more effective than words is of strong impression but is limited to some certain circumstances. On the contrary, few people who are not mentioned in the above-mention category can last long with the words without pictures. This shows the durability of logical minds who can commensurate to the information without been pampered with images irrespective of the news or information been passed across. Although, it’s been observed that more mature people in the ages of thirty and above are relevant to the contrary sense of the above mentioned ideology.
To conclude, either view can’t be done away it because they are interwoven. They are needed to explicitly conveyed information not understood to each other. Both ideology as discussed are of good thoughts whereby is put human nature and growth into consideration because human beings are different to each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 766, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ation expected by the convener to them. Moreover information is a message that's be...
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Line 3, column 1155, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4387755102 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95990051135 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3462450761 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.411764706 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1361043329 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439948508637 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428973477984 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806940188231 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481969389365 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.