You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter, you should say:•Why you want to quit•When you want to leave•What you liked about the company.

Essay topics:

You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager.

In your letter, you should say:

• Why you want to quit

• When you want to leave

• What you liked about the company.

Dear Manager,

As you know I’ve been working at AWB company for the last 7 years, where I started my first work here, and grew up with this company and passed through many different stages. I am writing to inform you, that it is time to move forward for a new career challenge, that’s why I need to quit from my position.

I had the opportunity to work for another international company overseas. I’ve got a high position, with good offer conditions and benefits, that each one try to reach in his life.

I am willing to submit my resignation officially by today, hoping it will be accepted from the human resources department and your side. I will send an email also to the HR requesting to finalize all my documents and the pay slips.

However, I am going to miss this company and the full support that I gained from the team, in order to be where I am right now. This company was and still my second family and I am sure that the experience that I collected from here, will assist me at my new workplace.

I would like to thank you for all these wonderful years, by standing next to me in all good and bad times.

Thank you,

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...up with this company and passed through many different stages. I am writing to inform you, tha...
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Line 11, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...ping it will be accepted from the human resources department and your side. I will send a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 145, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...ources department and your side. I will send an email also to the HR requesting to finalize a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50704225352 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51722886967 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2438103966 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163665657577 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838198676387 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961506626894 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072667506485 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642789377306 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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