You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
I am writing this essay to reach out to the masses who are novices or rookies in their professions. This topic is addressing dilettantes who are keen to follow my message and make a change to their career plans to prosper in a foreseeable future.
Firstly, let us read about Mr. Warren Buffet, a billionaire stock exchange investor and his success story. As an adolescent, he started his career as a news paper delivery boy. After accumulating cash, an idea crept into his mind to multiply his earnings. So, he always put aside some amount from his hard work and invested. During those days of industrial revolution, market returns were promising. Following a philosophy of saving a penny today, will be useful on a rainy day is what made him a wealthiest man. This was achievable because, he continuously changed his work areas, for example, worked as investor sometimes, purchased companies frequently making him a founder, sold companies for profit playing role of a capitalist businessman and wrote books related to key subjects based on money multiplier strategies, investment banking etc., and made a fortune in his every venture.
Secondly, if you take time to interview successful CEO's, many will confirm with good news that they had fulfilled different jobs responsibilities for at least three to four companies before they accomplished their goal. Also, continuously studied new modules based on their specific requirements like to gain subject matter expertise in order to lead management. Similarly, many prominent small and medium enterprise owners experimented in various industrial sectors before they saw their days of glory. This is because of a key element called as 'Exposure' and more you have it, a person is considered more knowledgeable. Added advantage is, this will help to win shareholders, authorities and publics trust on you.
To conclude, above are just few examples only and success does not knock at anyone's doors if they do not search for opportunities. It is suggested that, be different and update yourself with knowledge throughout.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...g this essay to reach out to the masses who are novices or rookies in their professions...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... adolescent, he started his career as a news paper delivery boy. After accumulating cash, ...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...f industrial revolution, market returns were promising. Following a philosophy of saving a pen...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... useful on a rainy day is what made him a wealthiest man. This was achievable bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19701492537 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9671311449 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692537313433 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9991554006 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132214709965 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416213057519 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344350972486 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696061992632 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141424379141 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.