You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
This is truly a controversial topic that I am writing today about abortion to be made legal or illegal. I cannot put forth my views as a yes or no for certain due to below reasons.
Firstly, advancements in technology improved social networking encouraging people to go out on dating and they are very soon falling in love with each other even before matrimony. To some societies, this is a sacrilege as this will lead to pre-marital sex which ultimately results in pregnancy. It is a conundrum to carry a child in a womb before marriage as the couples cannot manage financial resources to feed incoming child because data is suggesting that a male is often unemployed or a minor. So, females choose to get an abortion with parents support which is tolerable up to this extent only because they can get married secretly later on with someone else without letting public to mock at them as black moles on this planet. After learning about this, other civilians are happy as there is a solution available for their dark desires in the market and they became more wayward breaking religious laws of prohibiting sexual intercourse. They started mating wildly which led to sky-rocketing pregnancy rates around the world. Who should be blamed? Under this current situation, no one can blame anyone.
Secondly, there are severe health hazards due to this operation and an important example of this is pre-mature labor which often led to demise of girls as thy are physically unfit as minors to give birth to progeny. Another major drawback here is, feminine gender is disrespected socially and finding a blackmarked woman, a suitable bride is impossible. Finally, after birth, low incomed individual doing single parenting is a tough issue as they often fail to provide basic amenities to their toddlers. This makes surgery a better option to them.
To conclude, all advantages and disadvantages are balancing. This is a useful procedure to drop stomach when it is accidental or unaffordable and harmful as infidelity rates could soar making relationships blasphemous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04970760234 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82166166702 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663742690058 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9165843605 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158148215405 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514422945762 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788478075902 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981616730921 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875531723722 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.