You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Cities are facing many issues due to high population which is affecting the daily life of pupils as well. To reduce these problems some argue that moving towards rural area is the best option and government should think about this view. I would shed light on common problems and would suggest some solutions.
To begin with, one of most usual crisis could be the traffic congestion that is faced by the working people on everyday. To elaborate, highest number of masses leave for their job at same time and they try to live near by their office to save time which becomes the reason behind huge traffic. Additionally, traffic issue creates more troubles for the environment that again leaves effect on each person by breathing in poor air quality. Apart from this, in cities people live in congested houses where they can not see their roots attached with environment which can cause health issues such as mental pressure or heart diseases.
On the other hand, it can not be denied that moving from urban city to small towns would be feasible way to tackle this worry, however, there are many more ways to solve this such as varied job timings so that traffic could be decreased up to some extent. Also, government can plan cities architecture according to the population of that particular area. For instance, Spain has changed road models to catch the speed of its states and it could become successful. Moreover, authorities can make parks where everybody enjoy the beauty of nature and can do some exercise in fresh air.
In a nutshell, in my accordance living style of people need to accept various changes to avoid their daily problems and encouraging them to change their place could be helpful barely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... that is faced by the working people on everyday. To elaborate, highest number of masses...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...working people on everyday. To elaborate, highest number of masses leave for their job at...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...r job at same time and they try to live near by their office to save time which becomes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33863511825 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7769156466 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200062478612 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683685099662 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465022796794 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120007188671 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465973249373 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.