You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
You should write at least 254 words.
It has been seen in pas t few years that toddlers are more interact with computers than before which is becoming a huge concern as they choose computer games over the physical sports. I would shed light on causes that give birth to this situation and discuss its effect on the society.
To begin with, first and foremost reason is working parents. Most of the guardians are doing jobs to run the family expenses smoothly due to which they can not make time for their young ones, also they can not let them go out alone for playing. Therefore, children spend their half day in front of box playing video games at home. Moreover, technology attracts everyone towards itself which encourage people to buy tabs for youngsters as gifts on various occasions. Along with this, many want to keep adults safe from the drugs world and to do so they don not allow kids to got out playing with others that loosing child's interest in sports.
Although, this development has its own merits, but still the weightage of its demerits proves it as negative development. Firstly, it is affecting the eyesight of juveniles. Furthermore, teenagers are lacking behind in maintaining their physical strength as they are taking part in sports which leads to various health issues in in very young age such as obesity due to sitting for whole day and playing games on laptops. In addition to it, their interpersonal skills such as team work are not developing properly due to staying home alone.
In a nutshell, it is undeniable that computers took place of physical sports already, however, we have to think about the situation and look for possible solution to solve this issue.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It has been seen in pas t few years that toddlers are more inter...
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Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun want seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wants'.
Suggestion: many wants
... on various occasions. Along with this, many want to keep adults safe from the drugs worl...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'negatives'?
Suggestion: negatives
... weightage of its demerits proves it as negative development. Firstly, it is affecting t...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ts which leads to various health issues in in very young age such as obesity due to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8006993007 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45171723579 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65034965035 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2960305488 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132264146409 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436083139356 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424346578713 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737710294769 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126277529553 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It has been seen in pas t few years that toddlers are more inter...
^^^
Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun want seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wants'.
Suggestion: many wants
... on various occasions. Along with this, many want to keep adults safe from the drugs worl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'negatives'?
Suggestion: negatives
... weightage of its demerits proves it as negative development. Firstly, it is affecting t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ts which leads to various health issues in in very young age such as obesity due to s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8006993007 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45171723579 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65034965035 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2960305488 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132264146409 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436083139356 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424346578713 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737710294769 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126277529553 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.