You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance?
Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
There is a discussion whether money ought to be charged for visiting museums, art exhibitions or not. One part of demos sincerely assume that taking money from visitors is a decent practice and the another part of people honestly believe that paying for seen masterpieces of artwork and historical artifacts is indecent practice which should be abandoned. Below we will look at arguments which are presented by both sides and after that I will share my viewpoint on the issue with my reader.
To begin with, paying some money for watching historical items and art works has its conspicuous advantages. Probably the most obvious one is that the money might be used to pay the staff of the venues as well as spend some money on maintenance of the works which are demonstrated to the public. In fact, many museums even managed to acquire new items for their exhibitions, for instance, Museum of Russian hisotory has recently bought an ancient painting of Holy Trinity on one of Europes auctions. The purchasing of the painting will not be possible without substential amount of money collected from visitors.
At the same time, many people tend to adhere to opposing opinion that works of arts and historical items must be available to all people. The main argument which is used by them is that those works and items are national heritage and therefore government should allocate money to the museums and art galleries. Moreover, if all musuems and exhibitions are free from charge, students and pupils will be able to visit them as often as they want or need. For instance, today children who studied at school have to pay and this amount sometimes may be a serious one. To illustrate my claim, we may take a look at the cost a ticket at Moscow art museum which costs about 50 dollars. Although this amount may be seen as insignificant by a foreighner, it may be unbearable amount for some families.
In my opinion, the best solution to this issue would be reducing price for visiting those places to minimum. This may be easily achieved in case government will include expenses on museums and art galleries in budget. If it is done, all people who want to participate to the arts and historycal values will be able to see them, at the same time, some money will be recieved from public and this additional income may be used
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... Museum of Russian hisotory has recently bought an ancient painting of Holy Trini...
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...c and this additional income may be used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76790123457 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57490261113 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508641975309 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5788889919 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3125 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239366237098 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857424655159 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466071041477 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152477885202 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278486802329 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.