You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Nowadays, more and more people are having consumer goods like refrigerators and washing machines.
Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
These days, technological advancements have changed our lifestyles. Currently, it is playing an important role on our lives. Technology has made our lives easier. They have helped people, to focus on other things. There is a mix opinion, when it comes to advantages and disadvantages of technological advancements. This essay will highlight the benefits and issues, which consumer goods have made on our lives.
In today's world, technology has played its role. Introduction of consumers goods such as; refrigerator, washing machine and micro wave oven, have made things easier for people and now they can focus on other things as well. Working class, has highly benefited from this, as it has made their lives simple. Moreover, costs of different things have reduced, such as; gas expenses have been reduced, due to usage of micro-wave oven. Furthermore, refrigerator has provided people with an opportunity to store items for longer period of time.
However, technology has helped to improve lifestyle, but it has caused some issues as well. Due to over usage of micro-wave oven, people have become prone to diseases such as: cancer. This is being caused due to gamma rays emitted from micro-wave oven. Moreover, storing fruits, vegetables and other food items in refrigerator, reduce the nutrients of these items.
Technological advancements have been beneficial when it comes to making life easier, but with facilities comes cost as well. However, it is important to make sure, that these things are utilised in a positive way and aren't over used. Because, over use of this could raise serious health issues. Therefore, in my opinion it is important to maintain a balance between use of technology and traditional methods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...consumer goods have made on our lives. In todays world, technology has played i...
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...n opportunity to store items for longer period of time. However, technology has helped to ...
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...store items for longer period of time. However, technology has helped to improv...
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..., reduce the nutrients of these items. Technological advancements have been ben...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ke sure, that these things are utilised in a positive way and arent over used. Because, over use ...
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...ings are utilised in a positive way and arent over used. Because, over use of this co...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in a positive way and arent over used. Because, over use of this could raise serious h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26353790614 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8255965071 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.712548102 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7368421053 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110682149406 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343116958063 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345217410238 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681313716163 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327002928542 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.