Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right.”
Do you agree with this statement?
Write your essay giving your opinion using examples from your own experience.
The strangers are dealt with impressive attitude by people meeting for the first time. I strongly agree with this notion that all and sundy try to behave properly and in a decent manner when they meet an unknown person. The reasons and justifications for this behavior are explained in paragraphs below.
First and foremost, it is obvious that first impressions are the last impacts on human beings that could last for a long time. It depends upon the circumstances how a person behaves with a stranger. For instance, a robber in front of a law judge would be treated mostly in the same manner, an anti-social activist is dealt with. So, there is hardly any chance of culprit being spared without any treatment. Moreover, unknown customers always receive friendly treatment from the seller, in order to prove to be a good salesman and increase his profitability.
On the contrary, it can be advocated that man is a social animal who try hard to establish a positive and an impressive image in society; therefore, can manipulate and construct the circumstances according to the situation. The generous and courteous behavior initially for a stranger is strong enough to portray him a civilized and well-mannered human in the society. Hence, initial impression could be put forward as the virtual image of the person; maybe for a short period of time.
In conclusion, it can be believed that human beings pretend to be good, generous and cultured by posing the right impact on unknown human beings rather than showing their usual behavior.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a decent manner" with adverb for "decent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ll and sundy try to behave properly and in a decent manner when they meet an unknown person. The r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng enough to portray him a civilized and well-mannered human in the society. Henc...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... image of the person; maybe for a short period of time. In conclusion, it can be believed t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79835566421 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.735950125 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831208349647 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367066215545 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354260241022 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572850052486 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488719755541 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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