People have been debating about the pros and cons of the statement about to stay healthy. Staying healthy is very important and necessary to live your life longer and stronger without anyone's help. According to my view point, I strongly prefer to exercises regularly and eat organic foods to live healthy life. My two rationales are a follows.
First of all, Doing exercises regularly is very crucial to live healthy life. Exercises makes you physically and mentally healthier. Doing exercises doesn't mean heavy weight lifting exercises. There are severe other types of stretching, strengthening, breathing, meditation and yoga can do which helps maintain cardiovascular system in its optimum level. I will give my personal example to illustrate this. My Grand father is 97 years old man who does exercises everyday. At that age, He never complained about getting tired. He is very independent man with doing all his routine by him self without any assistance. Whenever I asked Him the secret behind this health, he always motivate everyone to do exercises on regular basis. He is the perfect example of living a long life with good health as a result of regular exercises.
The another reason is that you should eat heathy food to maintain health. Now days, farmers use a lot of pesticide to grow the vegetable and fruits faster and kill the bacteria which is not healthy at all. If you eat that kind of contaminated food, You have a higher chances to catch diseases. For example, Federal research center conducted study on two different groups of people. One group with people who regularly eat inorganic and affordable vegetables, while other group of people who eat strictly organic vegetables. Research conducted to find who live healthy and long life. When I saw the result, I was surprised. People from Group two live 85% better life compare to people who eat cost affordable inorganic food.
All in all I conclude that Doing exercises on regular basis and eating organic food will not just help to become fit mentally and physically, but it also help you to live a long and healthy life. I wholeheartedly believe that we should consider the exercises and food in terms of positively in order to open the door of our bleak future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, for example, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96031746032 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64581082861 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566137566138 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5793638361 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.125 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191056370202 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518557725901 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409757351746 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102410646179 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452670990978 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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