1. People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
There have been some moot points about staying healthy. The question of what do you do for good health has aroused as a subject of controversy among scientist. Everyone has his own zeitgeist. When it comes to my position by weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that doing regular exercise and eating organic foods is a very important aspect of being healthy. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be explicated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason worth discussing here is that regular exercises have a great impact on humans health. Exercises boost the metabolism rate in mankind and help them to be in fitness condition. As a case to the point I vividly remember, two days ago I watched a program on the BBC channel, in that program scholar conducted an experiment for measuring the exercise impact on humans health. In that test, two groups of fatty patients who have overweight participated. One group experienced regular sports and another one did not have any exercise. The result showed that the group which did not have regular exercise, were susceptible to many diseases like a heart attack, however, the group which had a regular sport, loosed their weight easily. My personal example competently corroborates to the point that regular physical activity is very important for humans body and healthiness.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that nowadays due to increase in the population of countries, they need more foods and vegetables, therefore farmers use many pesticides and chemical substances for more cultivation. These materials are very harmful to humans health. Many doctors recommended using organic foods and vegetables. My personal experience demonstrates this reality, two years ago I lost my hairs dramatically. That is a very difficult situation for me and cause depression for me. As a result, I met my family doctor who suggests me to omitted some foods and vegetables from my diet. In my new diet, I did not eat inorganic materials thus, after six months, my hair grow again. My personal experience shed some light on the point that eating organic foods is very crucial for our body.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that, well-being is very significant for everyone, this issue not only help people to be happy but also raise their lifetime. Hence, I recommend for good health, individuals have regular physical activity and organic diet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as a result, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03373493976 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78978914996 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556626506024 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6622587817 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9545454545 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175797614024 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518289254302 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793528274571 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113735961306 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765148306573 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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