You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
There are some moot points about a foreign country which we have an opportunity to visit that. The question of the features of this country has aroused as a subject of controversy among people. When it comes to my position, with weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly prefer to visit Italy. I have some reasons the most outstanding of which will be aptly explicated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason worth discussing here is that one of the significant aspects of a foreign country which tempt me to visit a country is the building of that country. Due to my expertise which is civil engineering and relates to the building. I try to visit new buildings and new concepts. Consequently, Italy is a perfect country in this issue. As a case to the point, Pizza tower is a very valuable structure in this country and gather many tourism and engineers from all over the world for visiting. Furthermore, Italy is a famous country in ancient architectures. For instance, Rome is the best city to visit ancient concept in architecture. My personal reason competently corroborates to the point that visiting Italy is very important for me.
By the same token, another paramount reason which motives me to visit Italy is Italian foods and Italian modes. The reputation of Italian foods are well known for everyone. As a result, they travel to this country for trying the Pasta and the Pizza. Moreover, there are many clothes and modes company in Italy which work on new fashion modes, therefore, these features attract people from other countries to visit Italy. My personal example demonstrates this reality, I really enjoy buying perfumes. One of the best companies in this field is Versace. I love Versace designs perfumes. Due to the place of the company established in Italy, I am eager to visit this company. As a consequence, I actually tend to visit Italy and Versace company as soon as possible. My personal reason shed some light to the point that I totally prefer to travel to Italy as a foreign country.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that If I want to choose a county for visiting I will select Italy. This country not only is famous in the building and architecture but also, is repudiated in the foods and fashion modes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7803030303 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74194868172 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487373737374 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7368614163 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.875 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286842728767 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839366082298 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630170792488 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189953261336 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597204786304 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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