Some people may argue that money is the most significant feature when it comes to deciding what job you want to have. I completely disagree with this statement. In my opinion, although money can be considered as an important factor it's not everything. Interests, being able to move up and gain respect are among the most determining features that everyone should consider when it comes to select a career.
Being interested in a specific field of work can guarantee your success. you can't force anyone doing something that they don’t like. for example, if you ask a child what job do you want to get when you grow up, the child doesn't consider how lucrative the job would be, the answer is only based on his interests. in addition, you can't tolerate the problems and difficulties of the work environment unless you are enthusiastic about your job enough to keep up.
According to the old saying, the human dies when he feels that he is not progressing. The quote is self-explanatory. every human being needs to satisfy his needs for progress. imagine that you have a very demanding job that requires you to stay in the office for long hours, can you tolerate the situation without considering that what you are doing can be beneficial for your job prospect? Progress is like an integral part of a decent career.
Gaining respect is another reason that can motivate you to apply for a job. In a society, every job has a degree of respect but they are not on the same page. How people might treat a doctor is different than their behaviour toward a mine worker. I admit that is not a good thing but unfortunately, it is true. in order to earn more respect people, tend to get a high-profile job. as a consequence, many people think about how respectful a job is before they consider the salary.
Although it's been said that a high income is the most outstanding feature of selecting a job, I'm strongly against this idea and I think respect, progress and interest are the most valuable aspects of a job that anybody should reflect on before choosing their career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70410958904 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67464622101 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.099830795 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.85 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229921761908 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636285079231 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570547195122 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124359453956 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407945848374 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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