#7 How do movies or television influence people's behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Alludu Seenu movie is a complete family drama released in the year of 2014 produced by Bellamkonda Suresh with his elder son Bellamkonda Sreenivas(Alludu Seenu) as hero, Samantha Akinenni(Anjali) as heroine and cinema actor Prakash Raj(Narayana) played dual role. Coming to the story line the entire movie revolves around Bellamkonda Seenu and Prakash Raj(Narayana). Bellamkonda Seenu is an orphan happens to meet Narayana who lost his entire family in a road accident. From then they becomes mama and alludu without any blood relation and they living in a village. Alludu Seenu is very Naughty guy where as his mama Narayana is innocent. Alludu Seenu as no job for survival then he borrows money from his villagers and finally it ended up with debts in his village. One night Alludu Seenu planned to escape for Chennai with his mama and he does the same,But god as some other plans to do they both get into Hyderabad. There it begins the actual story,Alludu Seenu meets Anjali daughter of Bhai alias Parayana. Bhai looks same as Narayana,he is a landlord with corrupted and evil brain. By accidentally Seenu meets Bhai,Seenu surprises with Bhai's appearance. There enters Bramahanandam(Dimple) he is serving as a personal assistant to Bhai,Seenu meets dimple he mesmerizes him and he starts his business deals, land settlements,and many other money making ideas by portraying his mama Narayana as Bhai. On the otherhand he is in love with Anjali. Interval bangs with some twists and turns in the story Anjali rejects Seenu,Bhai came to know that Narayana ,Bhai's brother is still alive. Going back to flashback Narayana is a sarpanch at his village he is good at heart and loves his people alot but Parayna is money minded never cares about family and relations then he plans for a road accident to kill his brother and his family,So that he can own his brother's property. Unfortunately Narayana's daughter Anjali was alive in the accident. Parayana convinced everyone in the village even his daughter Anjali that his brother Narayana is a cheater. Coming back at Sharja Anjali got engaged to Bhai's friend Sumangal's son he is very richest person in the world lives in Sharja. Finally Anjali comes to know Seenu's true love with her through her friends,and about her father Narayana. There it comes the climax fight between Alludu Seenu and Bhai.
Comedy tract in the movie is seen between Bramanandham and Alludu Seenu, Vennela kishore did justice to his role,Ravibabu as well.
Samantha Akineni looks good on screen with her glamour and expressions
Bellamkonda Suresh he have to improve alot in his facial expressions dialogues delivery
Prakash Raj did justice to his dual role.

Thumps up to- Samantha Akineni
Bramhanandam
Praksah Raj
Songs
Thumps down to- Bellamkonda Seenu
DOP

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Average: 0.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...mily in a road accident. From then they becomes mama and alludu without any blood relat...
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Line 1, column 592, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...llage. Alludu Seenu is very Naughty guy where as his mama Narayana is innocent. Alludu S...
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Line 1, column 847, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , But
...ennai with his mama and he does the same,But god as some other plans to do they both...
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Line 1, column 944, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Alludu
...erabad. There it begins the actual story,Alludu Seenu meets Anjali daughter of Bhai ali...
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Line 1, column 1031, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...as Parayana. Bhai looks same as Narayana,he is a landlord with corrupted and evil b...
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Line 1, column 1112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Seenu
... brain. By accidentally Seenu meets Bhai,Seenu surprises with Bhais appearance. There ...
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Line 1, column 1230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Seenu
... serving as a personal assistant to Bhai,Seenu meets dimple he mesmerizes him and he s...
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Line 1, column 1318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...rts his business deals, land settlements,and many other money making ideas by portra...
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Line 1, column 1513, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Bhai
... turns in the story Anjali rejects Seenu,Bhai came to know that Narayana ,Bhais broth...
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Line 1, column 1545, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ts Seenu,Bhai came to know that Narayana ,Bhais brother is still alive. Going back...
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Line 1, column 1820, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , So
...ident to kill his brother and his family,So that he can own his brothers property. ...
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Line 1, column 2165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...st person in the world lives in Sharja. Finally Anjali comes to know Seenus true love w...
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Line 1, column 2239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...s true love with her through her friends,and about her father Narayana. There it com...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Ravibabu
... Vennela kishore did justice to his role,Ravibabu as well. Samantha Akineni looks good o...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... and expressions Bellamkonda Suresh he have to improve alot in his facial expressio...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ole. Thumps up to- Samantha Akineni Bramhanandam P...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Bramhanandam Praksah Raj So...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Praksah Raj Songs Thumps down to- Bellamkonda Seenu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngs Thumps down to- Bellamkonda Seenu DOP
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, so, still, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09388646288 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71996058427 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519650655022 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0627675487 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.045454545 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86363636364 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0173990616561 0.236089414692 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00632997717802 0.076458572812 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0123955544173 0.0737576698707 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0044892379932 0.150856017488 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102774240342 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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