9 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn.
One of the thing that schools, universities, and other sort of college in the world use to evaluate student are marks. Many people have different beliefs about if grading students encourage them to learn more. However there are other people who believe marks lead student archive more knowledge. definitely, I agree with this statement that grades encourage the student to learn longer for several reasons that I will develop in the following paragraphs.
First of all, in so many activities such as college, courses, and everything activities that people are if they are doing the right thing is through grading them. furthermore, marks allow student see where they have some weakness and where they are sharp. For example, when I was at the University, always, I had worse marks in math, and excellent marks in biology. Thus, I knew that I had to improve and give my best in math area. I believe that grading student is necessary in order to see where they need to put their effort leading them to archive more knowledge.
Second, grading student allow institutes to know who and who is ready to take some advantages during study times. Actually, universities usually have different internships programs, but it have some requirements such as good marks from students. For instance, before I finished my degree as veterinarian, I made an internship in Italy, but that opportunity was because I graduated with honors. otherways, the university did not offer me that wonderful internship.
Finally, finishing with high grades at the university is the beginning in order to look for a job. furthermore, students who have higher marks than students who have lower marks have more opportunities to apply to better jobs market. Surely, marks are a good way to stimulate student to give the best of them. A few years ago, thank to my high marks I could apply for a job abroad, but one of the requirements was high grades on my degree. Fortunately, I had it, and I got it, it was one of the best experience I could have ever.
In conclusion, I believe that grading student is better for them for all those reasons I have mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85753424658 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72254337835 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498630136986 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5692045039 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3157894737 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283178793389 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868557097091 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859888158241 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157975502995 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103346510184 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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