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Benefits and drawbacks of college education has been a debated issue in the community lately. While some people assert that large universities have some significant downsides others keep up that the have a number of undeniable advantage. Although both sides have several pros and cons,I am of the that large universities offer various education in the different branch and widely cultural activities advantages that should not be ignored. I will elucidate the details of my support with some tangible detail and examples in the following paragraphs.
University education is the main controversy among the parents. Especially, it is known that it has hard accepted process. Large one provides different education opportunities which are course choice and international university deals. Firstly, when young students begin the college, they may have some confusion. They try to adapt college l condition in the mean time, college lessons may force.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...examples in the following paragraphs. University education is the main con...
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...e mean time, college lessons may force.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 52.1666666667 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 146.0 407.700716846 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52739726027 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87463232043 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691780821918 0.524837075471 132% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1209311329 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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