agree or disagree with the statement: For success in future job, the ability to relax well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Many people work hard in their study so that they can get high paying job in the future. Personally, I believe that the education quality is always affect our future career. In the following paragraphs, I will describe why I become proponent this statement.
First of all, well known university's education favors to the candidate to be selected for the future job prospects and enrollment in the university is impossible without the perfect school grade. In the highly competitive market, many company and institution look for the individual on the basis of the good academic record from the top universities. Before enrolling there, a decent grade in the school record is paramount. For instance; just after my graduation with distinction in my intermediate degree, I was selected to pursue my career in the IT field in the famous institution. Gladly, my university helped me later in my career as hiring committee gave chance looking at my academic credentials. Had I been graduate university from the normal institution, I would have definitely rejected in that opportunity.
To wrap up, I think hard study is essential for the good career in the job market. This is because people will get the advantages to enroll in the good university which is likely to land us good job prospects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...ve that the education quality is always affect our future career. In the following par...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... why I become proponent this statement. First of all, well known universitys edu...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'many companies'.
Suggestion: many companies
...rade. In the highly competitive market, many company and institution look for the individual...
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Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
..., I was selected to pursue my career in the IT field in the famous institution. Gladly...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
... selected to pursue my career in the IT field in the famous institution. Gladly, my u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, well, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02325581395 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92301066482 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7021822373 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1818181818 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179397879076 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657703730924 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560272824817 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126057011593 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225032112723 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.