Agree or disagree: Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyer
There is an old saying that states, “Teachers nourish and germinate the future germs of a country”. That is really true when doctors, lawyers, or business leaders, and so on, were taught by their teachers in order to be successful in their careers. Therefore, it is reasonable and indisputable that teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers, or business leaders. My points of view will be elaborated and exemplified below.
First of all, teachers play a no less important role in society than doctors, lawyers, or business leaders. Teachers are responsible for imparting their precious and profound knowledge to their students, who promisingly will become such doctors to cure diseases for patients, such lawyers to protect innocent citizens from crimes, and such business leaders to generate benefits and foster the economy of a country. Without their profound and knowledgeable teachers/mentors, will they be competent, and therefore, capable to receive those high salaries? Actually, it is very hard for them to be successful in their careers without the help of their venerable teachers. Hence, teachers should be paid appropriately and correspondingly to their spending efforts in education.
Second, a high salary plays as an incentive or great impetus for teachers to devote all their hearts and souls, as well as their abilities in educating students. In fact, teachers in some countries, especially in Vietnam, receive a quite low salary. This money only just helps them to pay for their families’ expenses, not to mention a comfortable life. Also, due to lacking money invested in their researches, the further achievements in their careers seem to be out of their hands. A lot of potential and eminent teachers want their research-works to be blossomed, but they cannot realize their dreams because they are lacking in money.
Furthermore, with a high salary for teachers, we can attract more talented students who are willing to become teachers in the future. Actually, there are a great numbers of students who really want to become teacher sin the future, but due to facing a poor and unattractive future perspective, they are not willing to do so. Additionally, although they are very talented and want to be teachers, they have to face with many temptations from other careers—doctors, engineers, to name but a few, that can provide them high salaries and comfortable working environment for them to do researches and develop their skills. Thus, only by paying appropriately for the teachers can we foster their commitment to their careers and attract more talented students to become teachers.
For the aforementioned arguments, there is no doubt that teachers are very important in generating talented and high-skilled workforce for a country, and they should be paid properly. In this way, we can foster our citizens’ standard knowledge and obtain new achievements that benefit all of us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, in fact, no doubt, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09624182599 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491489361702 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5700218231 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.55 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207958947483 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815794851478 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105431922886 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139213382274 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849288893895 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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