Today students are more interested in politics than the past. Do you agree or disagree
There is no doubt that current generation's lifestyle is different than that of past one. The involvement in politics plays a vital role in the life of students which they can make changes in their country so that they have a better place to live in. This brings up a controversial question: Is it true that students nowadays are not interested in the politics? In my perspective, I strongly assert that young adults' interest in politics is vanishing. The reasons behind this viewpoint are discussed in the following paragraphs.
The first reason that immediately comes to mind is that students do not study political science. In fact, nowadays, young adults study and attend in the universities which offer engineering or medical science programs. Some student choice to study engineering science in order to obtain a degree in engineering such as mechanical engineering. Moreover, People who studying human science do not take courses related to political sciences or even when they registered in the political sciences such as international politics, they decided to drop out. However, in the past, there were scores of people who intend to participate courses in order to gain some knowledge surrounding politics. All the aforementioned things indicate that new generation's interest in politics is lower than before.
The second and an important reason that supports my standpoint is that students do not care about politics. Indeed, juveniles talk about classroom discussion with each other in their break time and if there is a meeting regarding the political campaign, the students do not participate in them. For instance, in the last presidential election in my country, I observed a few people in the political campaign and most of them were old people. Additionally, students in their leisure time, do not consider to discuss their own country' political views. Nevertheless, in the past, young adults gather together in the restaurants to explain their thought toward political views of not only their own country but also other countries. So, as you can see, students’ interest in politics is less apparent than before.
The last but not the least, the students' mind is void of sufficient space to talk about politics. In fact, current posterity involves in finding a way to pay their university tuition fees, as the university tuition fees are much higher than the past. Students should work late at night after the school time in order to make money for the sake of paying their compulsory expenses including transportation bills, accommodation expenses and so forth. All of these activities fill up the students' mind and do not allow them to think about political matters in the world. Hence, it is likely that juveniles' attention to politics declines.
In conclusion according to above-mentioned factors, I contend that young adults are not interested in politics because they do not study political sciences and they do not care about politics and finally, their minds are not devoid of space.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17791411043 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89236893718 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494887525562 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1845616608 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.086956522 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2608695652 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47826086957 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307141540232 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967278443349 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650396005243 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188164399664 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340235303508 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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