TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When a person consider to take a journey to a foreign country, there is two method go there. One of them getting assistance from a tour guide and another one is taking a trip alone without using a tour guide. As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to take a tour guide because of the following reasons that I will discuss.
To begin with, one of benefits of traveling with a tour guide is that people will be able to explore their trip. In fact, tour guides are people who know well other countries tourism attraction. These people have a great deals of knowledge related to natural environments and national parks of foreign countries. They can guide us to places that have museums and historical buildings. By traveling with a tour guide, one will be able to go to restaurant and order her or his favorite foods for a lunch, as they can speak in restaurants in their language. Therefore, taking a tour guide will enable to us to discover other countries well which, in turn, brings us enjoyable moments.
Secondly, taking a journey in a group which is led by a tour guide helps us to save money. Indeed, tour guides have special information regarding to accommodation and transportation of other countries and they could guide us in order to recognize hotels where have reasonable prices. Moreover, traveler are able to spend less money for transportation in comparison with traveling alone, because they can inform us about ways that is the nearest way to places such as shopping stores so that we can arrive there with spending lower among of money. Therefore, they can led us for places such as museums by spending less money on transportation.
The last reason why I interested in traveling with a tour guide is that I will not get lost in another counties. In fact, by traveling with tour guides, I could easily go to hotels, shopping centers and so forth, as they are acquaintance with directions and streets well. Not only that, but also a tour guide can easily identify the places where serve local tasty foods and meals. Indeed, when I get hungry, a tour guide can lead me to a good restaurant since these subjects know address of excellent restaurants and cafeterias where serve delicious meals. However, when I have a trip to a foreign country, I do not know streets so, I may be get lost. So, as you can, another advantage of taking a journey with tour guides is not getting lost.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned factors, I contend that my preference is helping from a tour guide. The reasons for this viewpoint are exploring foreign country carefully, saving money and not getting lost. How will be a trip interesting if you could not communicate with people?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider taking'.
Suggestion: consider taking
When a person consider to take a journey to a foreign country, there i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...following reasons that I will discuss. To begin with, one of benefits of travel...
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Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...r guides are people who know well other countries tourism attraction. These people have a...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[3]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'for lunch'.
Suggestion: for lunch
...ant and order her or his favorite foods for a lunch, as they can speak in restaurants in th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in turn, brings us enjoyable moments. Secondly, taking a journey in a group wh...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...wer among of money. Therefore, they can led us for places such as museums by spendi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pending less money on transportation. The last reason why I interested in trav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73191489362 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72367352392 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448936170213 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.167038306 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159408588512 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568422813009 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392906924381 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101055140643 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103497470429 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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