Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Travaling to many places is fun and people can releize their tention of there lives. Many people love to travel new places and discover new places too. Personally I disagree with the statement that traveling in a group with a tour guide is the best way. I feel this way for two main resons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, traceling with a guide is ristrict your freedom in you trip. Because according to his guidence we have to go all the time. My own experience is a compelling example for this. Last year I went to India to see the Budha Gaya with my group of friends and a tour guide. The guide was well known about the place. There for he took us only to see the some places and he skiped some palces. When I asked while returning why didn't we visit other places, he told that those are not important and he took us for most important places.
Secondly, taking a tour guide is a vasting mony since most of the tour guides are lack of knologe about the aeras where they visit. Most of them are with out experience and they do their job sake of earning money. For instant, One our university organiced a trip to Sigiriya. The university decided to hire tour guids for the trip, because students will get good knologe about the places when they travel with tour guides. But while on the trip we get to know that those tour guides are useless and they didn't know much about the history of the Sigiriya rock.As student we had a better knowledge than them. We realized that they have come only to earn some mony not to share their knowledge.
In conclution, I strongly belive that having a tour guide in a travelling group is not good. This is because of the experionce of last year which I had and my university experiance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, well, while, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4263803681 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25003920575 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8413897207 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9473684211 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18048814652 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061561405046 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928248539437 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114530539452 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534367142039 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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