Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has their own travel preferences and we should chose the way which suites our liking and by which we enjoy the most. Personally, I believe it is best to travel alone and explore the places. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore further.
To begin with, many people don’t like dependency on others to explore different places. If you are in group you have to take care of likes and dislikes of other group members, and as a result, you miss the enjoyment which have otherwise achieved if you would have traveled alone. Further, while travelling alone we can look out places which we like the most and can vary our schedule as per our preferences. For instance, my sister recently went to Thailand with group of her friends. After, she is back from her trip, she revealed that it would have been better if she would have traveled alone. Her group has two other girls, who took a lot of time in dressing up every day which resulted in them being late for the locations which they plan to visit each day. This states that if my sister would not have dependency on her other group members, she would have reached out to each locations on time and would have enjoyed better.
Secondly, travelling alone helps me to explore places within my budget without over-spending on unimportant things. While alone, I can stay in a hostel and share my room with other travelers. Moreover, in place on eating in a five star hotel, I can have my meals at a local joint and enjoy authentic cuisines of that particular tourist place. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Four years ago, I was planning to have a trip to Europe, but I was concerned about the expenses which will incur if I plan to go with a group of people accompanied by a tour guide. One of my friend suggested that I should try travelling alone so with that I can manage my trip as per my preferences and can control my expenses. I tried the same and booked my whole trip and tickets all by myself and I feel that I took the right decision as I was able to save much of the money which I can use in my next adventures. This depicts that if I would not have planned to travel alone, I would have spent alone in hands of a travel guide.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should travel individually to look for places. This is because you don’t have dependency on other members to enjoy your trip, and because you can have your trip as per your preferences which can suit your budget.
- Implementation of four day work week. 80
- Impact to wildlife specially birds with expansion of human population 80
- Implementation of four day work week. 73
- Measures to control spread of cane toad in Australia 73
- In many places, students aged 12-18 are typically taught different subjects by different teachers while younger students are usually taught by only one teacher all day long. However, it would also benefit younger students to be taught by several different 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN
Message: Did you mean 'had traveled'?
Suggestion: had traveled
...nt which have otherwise achieved if you would have traveled alone. Further, while travelling alone ...
Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN
Message: Did you mean 'had traveled'?
Suggestion: had traveled
...d that it would have been better if she would have traveled alone. Her group has two other girls, w...
Line 9, column 1028, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...spent alone in hands of a travel guide. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.431670282 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42722042008 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455531453362 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4949422347 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.15 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.05 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140359559681 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498975337978 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350639659391 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961829915555 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116861786983 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.