Agree or disagree/tradition should be followed without taking care of individual prefernce
Tradition has tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate it because it encompass our core and effects in indelible way to the society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that tradition is not momentous to our life and personality. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal and actual observation of life which has led me to agree with the idea that tradition plays a pivotal role in person’s ideology, preference, and welfare. In the following essay I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, tradition represent our history and culture, person without roots cannot have self-satisfaction. Furthermore, will not have been respected by others as he will neglect his tradition. My personal experience is a good example of this. I live in the USA since four years, since I came here; I shall never know any people from my back home. I felt in a deep sadness since each time our tradition celebration came a round. Eventually, I felt myself like I am nobody. Later, with the help of some my American’s neighbor who was sharing my feelings and understand it and at the same time respect it, helps me to find and join some of group that have same my culture traditions. Apparently, it must be taken into account that persons who are not follow their tradition certainly, will felt lost and have no history.
In addition, following our tradition could certainly help building family connection and continue our cultural reunion especially if we live in a country that have completely different culture’s habits. For instance, as I and my family live in the USA, we get separated from any other connections. We lost the leisure of joining some events that mostly take place in our back-home, like, Aids Al-Fiter,Aid Al-Aidha,Nourouz, and soon. Moreover, it is hard to our youth to build their own families and find the proper spouse in a differnet countries. Surely, any family follow the tradition as a priority for them, will found it easy to connect with others and fulfill their individual’s needs.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into consideration, I would reinforce my idea that tradition has a vast effects on our life and society and we should blindly follow it because of its importance on our ideology and welfare as well as it help in building and ameliorate our family reunion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: influences
...erage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is u...
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Suggestion: encompasses
...y important to appreciate it because it encompass our core and effects in indelible way t...
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...me time respect it, helps me to find and join some of group that have same my cul...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...n into account that persons who are not follow their tradition certainly, will felt lo...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...wing our tradition could certainly help building family connection and continue our cult...
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...ce in our back-home, like, Aids Al-Fiter,Aid Al-Aidha,Nourouz, and soon. Moreover, i...
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...vast effects on our life and society and we should blindly follow it because of i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00710900474 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01610365323 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556872037915 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1845932019 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.619047619 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152763638392 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409926363337 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412612651379 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920873738864 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132382356079 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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