Experience is the great guider and does the most experiences in our lives that seem difficult at the time become valuable lesson for the future? People express disparate opinions on this. From my perspective, I agree with that the grueling experience at the time become valuable lesson for the future in as much as the following reasons.
First, any experience is the real source of knowledge that directly suggests the future. The suggestion for the future is coming from our own experience. For instance, let take us my personal example, when I cannot pass the intermediate science, then the experience directed that I was a weak student in science. So, I must be left the science. As a result, I did not join the bachelor after passing the Intermediate by giving the exam in three times.
Second, experience is beneficial to solve the problem, we do not repeat the same mistake after doing certain work. The mistake is totally absent after taking the experience. For instance, my father is an industrious farmer. However, one day, all the crops was damaged by the over use of pesticides. From that, my father carefully uses any pesticides and our farm is growing and profitable.
Thirdly, when we have an experience, we make the plans to do the certain work. The plantation is essential for the fruitful work. For instance, I was a tyro in the teaching sector and I did not make the lesson plan because of the adequate experience in teaching. Students were not concentrated in my class and at last, they did not obtained in good marks as a result I must leave the teaching job. But, my friend, which had experience while teaching his own sister, became the good teacher.
In conclusion, experience is the valuable lesson for the future in as much as real source of knowledge, beneficial to solve any problem, and planning can be made easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'obtain'
Suggestion: obtain
...d in my class and at last, they did not obtained in good marks as a result I must leave ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71896547658 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2360276009 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0526315789 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392898478626 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108559241733 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145783014287 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236102521619 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165124127554 0.0645574589148 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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