Has the learning about the past essential for those of us living in the present? People express disparate opinions on this. From my perspective, the past is required for the present in as much as the following reasons.
First, from recalling the past event, we do not do any mistakes and this is a harbinger of the success of any persons. For instance, let us take my personal example, when I failed in the bachelor, I perused all the mistakes that happen in my exam. However, a myriad of peoples exegetically suggested that you must be left your major- Science, I did not eschew and gave the exam time to time by recalling the several mistakes and my past experience. At last, after three times, I passed the exam which was a grueling exam for me. In addition, today I do not repeat the same mistakes and the science is facile for me.
Next, some past events are essential for the people life that direct the person’s aims. For example, when my sister was suffering from the disease-Malaria, she did not get the better treatment because of the inadequacy of the good hospital and health assistance, doctors, and nurses. However, the disease was cured up by the local treatment. The deficiency of health staff and lack of the better treatment was so striking in her mind that she decided to become the nurse to help all the people.
Further, when we ignore the some event, from the careless we cannot learn anything new. To try to learn some new events in the present, we should care the past event. For example, I did not recorded the own past expenditure, that way, I used the lots of money for entertainment and I did not have the interest to learn the anything new. However, when my father gave the detailed record of the money, while I was using to study. After that, I realized the past event and today, I am endeavoring to improve the study by learning to something new.
In conclusion, we should be remembered the past event in as much as they are beneficial for present and future. We have several reasons to recall the past events but in my opinion, the above reasons are important reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...y recalling the several mistakes and my past experience. At last, after three times, I passed t...
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Line 8, column 29, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...people. Further, when we ignore the some event, from the careless we cannot lear...
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Line 8, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'record'
Suggestion: record
... the past event. For example, I did not recorded the own past expenditure, that way, I u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61375661376 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57947768035 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486772486772 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9250088991 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223059099352 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797029274994 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926844058228 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141845064749 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818403348113 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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