In this era, has food become easier to prepare and improve the way of people live? People express various opinion on this. From my perspective, I agree that the easiness is coming in food preparing technology and this change improved our live because of the following reasons.
First, the arising of innovative techniques save our time although we have some difficulties at the beginning of these newest technologies. People can adapt easily to the newest technology and prepare the food in a second. For example, when I had the microwave, initially I spent lots of time but after learning that how to run the microwave, I expeditiously prepare the food. Moreover, I made enough variety of food without spending the time. Thus, the innovative technique saves our time and improve our lives.
Next, from the easiness of preparing food, we can save our forest and that maintain the clean environment as well as healthy body. People do not have the obligation to damage the natural sources as they traditionally depend on such sources. For instance, in Nepal, many people used to prepare the food from the firewood and they damaged the forest even they had the opinion to preserve the forest. The deforestation increased the environment pollution and fume from the firewood damaged our health while preparing the food. But, when the government allocated the solar heater, people easily made the food without damaging the forest. As a result, many people did not suffer from the fatal disease like cancer. Therefore, the easy of preparing food changes the people’s lives.
Further, the fun and entertainment occur from the easiness on food preparation because anyone can prepare the food without boring. In most of the nation, the woman always prepares the food; however, she is feeling bored and does not have enough time. That arises the disagreement between the family members even though the family is an educated family. For instance, in Nepal, in early time, the food was prepared only by women and agitated at the cooking time. But, when the microwave, solar heater, rice cooker made the easy in preparation of food, men also assisted the women so that the family members entertainingly ate the food. Hence, the easy in food preparation improve the way of people living condition.
In conclusion, the easy in food preparation certainly improved the people living condition because it saves the time, can keep the environment clean and healthy, and people get the fun and entertainment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09223300971 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68636145096 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470873786408 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5033213375 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04545454545 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197637925702 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816894481857 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806766551 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150067139116 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902424133375 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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