Are government doing good in educating people to pay attention to the importance of the food nutrition and healthy eating?
In the current society, many young people totally ignore their health, as they have an irregular diet, sleep late every day, and scarcely involve in sports. In response to this phenomenon, some people argue that it is the government that should be responsible since the government is not sufficiently educating people about the importance of a healthy lifestyle, as well as eating habits. From my perspective of view, this claim proves to be nothing but a misunderstanding.
To begin with, the government have influenced people through all kinds of media, such as newspaper, TV programs, Internet, etc., which stress the significance of a healthy diet. Especially in recent years, we could see various of TV shows, informing people how to select the food material of high quality, how to allocate the nutrition intake in each of the daily meals, and how to avoid diseases, like heart disease and liver cancer, through a balanced diet. What's more, these shows are mainly put on prime time, so that a wider range of the public would have a chance to receive such important information.
Besides mainstream media, public service advertisements as well show the government effort to remind people of the importance of a healthy diet. Let me take a recent public service advertisement, which has drawn public attention, as a good example. In the ad, a promising young man has graduated from a famous college, with the offer from a top-tier company, and becomes a millionaire after several years' struggling. It is just a dreamy life for many of us. However, at the end of the ad, this "life-winner" suffers a sudden death of stomach cancer because he turns a blind eye to nutrition intake and always stays up to struggle. Then, a striking line of words popped out: "You Don't Want to Be Like Him". It does offer a reminder to those people who are striving hard to achieve impressive work performance but neglect their physical health.
Admitting that there are still some improvements that can be done for the government, what I want to emphasize here is that it is not how many reminders from the government but how much will you change from an unhealthy diet that counts. What if you are suffering from obesity simply because you are still eating plenty of chips even though you have watched the public service advertisement? What if you get a severe stomachache simply because you ate at a small workshop owing to its delicious tastes although you have noticed it may have some potential problems. Should the government be responsible for those behaviors? Definitely not! Such kind of people does bear the consequence of what they did.
Thus, my idea is quite clear: the government has taken adequate measures to indicate people, including diverse public media and public service advertisements, but some people still ignore that information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, well, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2403.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04831932773 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90862160139 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560924369748 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3334345573 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.473684211 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0526315789 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190078141616 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549191681689 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689855791312 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107028741673 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531383965144 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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