are you agree or disagree that children should use computer games?
Playing for children is very substantial because they could learn many things by playing, even it's a proper way to teaching children but along with all of the game kinds isn't accepted by councilors and sociologists. One of the common games in between children is computer game. Someones think playing computer games is a waste of time and someones have opposite idea. I think it can have advantage and disadvantages. I will state my idea in follow:
Firstly the detrimental effects of destruction computer games on children are most important disadvantages computer hobbies. Some games and applications of computer have improper result for children such as: war games. These games make aggressive and contentious mood for them. Not only these habits are annoying for their family, but also these are perfectly contagious and easily it is distributed among other children who are close relative with.
On the other hand, every technology is created with aim service to humanity so and inventing of computer has played significant role in human progress. Even it can be useful for children. For instance, children are encouraged by means of training games and educational help applications more than before. In result teaching space become more appealing and handy for them, including educational application for mathematical which is very common and according my experience is very useful.
Consequently, I firmly believe advantage and disadvantage of every technology are related to users invents.
Correct using of technologies make which become beneficial and functional, on the other hand, misuse of technology make to become applicable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... technology make to become applicable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41634241245 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94692563437 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2574130128 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243847901965 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992780498919 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893194181746 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116644040153 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871078231605 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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