do you agree or disagree that nowadays students are interested to politics.

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do you agree or disagree that nowadays students are interested to politics.

People in different period of their time have various favorites. In this between its tried to advert to tendencies of students and teenagers, because this course is very important for everyone and it can effects on all of the people’s life. But about increasing interested of student to politics. I fairly believe it’s true and now day’s students and teenagers are interested to political issue. I state my idea by two reason; at the first enduring the time and in recent decades the level of education and literacy have gone up. Ensuing awareness social has improved that this makes more attention to politic and social subjects. The attention of parents and adult people make students eager to subjects like politics.
For example I can remember which my grandmother knew a few our nigh bore countries only. And she didn’t have a lot political information.
At the second, it seems along with increasing cyberspace in people life. They are update about all of the information including politics.as a result watching constantly the political news in cyber space make to yearn people about such news. Since the students are effected directly by their parents conducts, in result they will be inclined to their parent’s routine actively. For example enduring of presidential election in my country, my nephews keep tracked seriously and even they could not do their homework. Consequently, it is obvious that progress of technologies like networks and cyber space and on the other hand boosting of education and literacy in today’s societies make more attention of adult people and students to political and social issues. But it seems tendency of student to such issues is not appropriate because of they should focus on their self-teaching and enjoying of their life by hike and hobbies.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'effect'
Suggestion: effect
... very important for everyone and it can effects on all of the people's life. But a...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tant for everyone and it can effects on all of the people's life. But about increasin...
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Line 1, column 712, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'subject'.
Suggestion: subject
...and adult people make students eager to subjects like politics. For example I can reme...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e in people life. They are update about all of the information including politics.as a res...
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Line 3, column 840, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...udent to such issues is not appropriate because of they should focus on their self-teaching and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, so, for example, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20068027211 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85681282512 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.347748052 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124084263075 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526216090032 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800020166217 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738735948629 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595904672778 0.0645574589148 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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