you agree or disagree that selecting the job that is similar to their parent’s job is the right choice?
It is irrefutable that we live in a world in which job plays an increasingly pivotal role in human life. For someone for his future career arouses much controversy among people with different perspective and background. Nowadays some may hold the opinion that selecting the job that are similar to their parent’s job is the right choose. Other may have negative attitude toward
As for as I am concerned, I firmly agree with choose a job that it is differ from the families job makes people. My argument for this point are listed as follows
In the first place, the most important reason for me to choose this position is that favor is the critical aspect of any success in ones future life. When someone wants to start any job, the elementary propulsion for him or her to keeping that job is that they like do in another world without favor.
It’s impossible for anyone to obtain any triumph in the oncoming time, as well as it will be regarded as wasting time and makes people to receive a big failure. For example, my father is an mechanical engineer, I remembered that when I was in high school the time students must take their major future in the university , he suggest me to select his major but I very liked chemistry and I had lack of interest to his major. When I look myself and ask was it the right selection I definitely say yes and now I am doing my study in my favorite major in chemistry, polymer chemistry and I feel I will be successful person in the near future. So the favor acts a fundamental factor in the consent emotion in any person.
In the second place, talent is an intrinsic ability in all humans. When you ask someone that has not any talent in that work, no one will catch any progress. On top of that it may cause to irrecoverable damages. For instance, take an artist as an example. He wants his son to continue his job, but his son has no any talent in that job. His father put him in diverse classes but there isn’t any vivid results. I think it makes his son to accept the fact that he has no ability in his future life, in another word he considers this as a very bad memory in his mind. So the critical aspect that must be notice along with many other factors.
In conclusion taking account all of these factors. I conclude that there are two important factor that must be notice for parents that want children keep on their job. Firstly, the favor is the crucial factor for progress in that job. Second talent is the intrinsic ability that is ambient and special for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place, in the second place, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45806451613 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44146884838 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488172043011 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.024298866 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2272727273 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1363636364 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222649834032 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684420080466 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111295381806 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133752331839 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755736922661 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.