Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
With the rapid development of technologies, modern life is much more complex than it was before. Nowadays, young people tend to be worried about their futures because the world is always changing rapidly. The statement that the ability of planing and organizing is necessary for young people to have is an intriguing topic. I agree with the statement and I believe that young people should plan as earlier as they can.
Compared to two decades ago, young generations are exposed to much more extensive infomation nowadays. Computers, smart phones, social medias and other newly invented technologies bring the so-called big data to young people. Even though in most situations, the big data is beneficial to the daily lives of young people such as much easier communication than before and a stronger media to know news outside their worlds, they are actually placed in danger because the world is changing much faster than before. For example, a telephone used to be a very common tool that was bought by every family. People who got a job in the telephone industry might earn a good living at that time. But now, telephones have started to disappear due to the widely common use of mobile phones which are much more convenient and multi-functional. Thus, if young people do not realize the ongoing changes, they might be in trouble in terms of their jobs or careers.
Planning and organzing lives ealier can help better prepare the young people for the future challenges they may encounter. Undertanding the future needs of the world can help young people stay strong and firm when the future changes come. For example, as the IT industries rapidly progress, there are large amounts of needs and opportunies for young people. If the young people could notice this and start to prepare even when they are relatively young, they will have much higher chances to secure a well-paid job when they graduate from universities. In contrast, if the young people do not spend time in understanding how the world is changing, they might end up with a career that is highly risky like a job in the telephone industry mentioned above. Thus, making a early plan is important for young people who would like to have a stable and bright future.
Admittedly, it is true that some people still enjoy good lives without planning for themselves. For example, there are many rich kids in China who do not need to worry about their future because their parents have collected extensive fortune for them to use. However, these cases are relative rare and they are not controlled by young people, but the previous generations. Without a doubt, being born in such a family is luck, but luck is something we should not reply on. Therefore, for majority of young people who do not have wealthy parents, planning and organizing for their future are indeed much more imporant and essential.
To sum up, even though some young people might still live in decent lives without properly planning for their futures, most young people have to make a plan eariler in order to be well-prepared for the future challenges.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-14 | Zmx_6 | 83 | view |
| 2023-07-14 | Zmx_6 | 73 | view |
| 2023-07-11 | YasamanEsml | 81 | view |
| 2023-07-04 | Vivian Chang | 60 | view |
| 2023-06-01 | slliland | 90 | view |
- The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres."Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards shoul 89
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People should spend money on things that last a long time such as expensive pieces of jewelry than spend money on short term pleasures like vacations 47
- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure 50
- The following appeared in a memo from the new vice president of Sartorian, a company that manufactures men's clothing.Five years ago, at a time when we had difficulties in obtaining reliable supplies of high quality wool fabric, we discontinued production 69
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hat young people should plan as earlier as they can. Compared to two decades ag...
^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ades ago, young generations are exposed to much more extensive infomation nowadays...
^^
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...he future changes come. For example, as the IT industries rapidly progress, there are ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 769, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... industry mentioned above. Thus, making a early plan is important for young peopl...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, in contrast, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2574.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90285714286 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54275797916 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 800.1 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.701824143 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.913043478 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8260869565 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359693976752 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111825242322 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069718467915 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234708595078 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667686268658 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.