Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that without one exact and regular plan not only young people cannot take advantage of golden chances, but also they would not succeed in flourishing and improving their intelligence. Therefore, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
First and foremost, there is a golden period for all human which they have the best mental and brain activity. Most famous scientist and outstanding researcher have done their innovation and impressive ideas during age between 20 to 40, after this period human intelligence going down. This fact substantiates the extreme importance of having the ability to manage and organizing activities, in order to minimize wasted times that it is necessary for young ones who pursue new things in the world.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that young people not only should seriously follow their study or job for progress and success, but also they should live in a happy way as possible as it is. Years of youth are the perfect time to find a future partner. All people need kindness and confident partner for a happy life. Thus, young people must be considering their time in a way which they have enough extra time for the relationship with other people to find their fit person for marriage.
Finally, yet importantly, young people should become a skillful person in the organization to be able to successfully handle different dimension of their life. In adult life, people are so busy with caring and growing children, jobs, maintaining home issues and etc. If they did not achieve related and required skills they will break under heavy life missions. For example, people who are not able to spend enough time with their family there is high per cent to get a divorce or do not have an appropriate relationship with their children.
On the basis of the reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize, because there is narrow time for flourishing talent, and young people should have all aspect of a happy life together, and because they should be skillful on organization to be successful in future time.
- TPO 3: Agree or disagree: It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO 49 3
- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. 76
- Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a happy way" with adverb for "happy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... and success, but also they should live in a happy way as possible as it is. Years of youth ar...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with caring and growing children, jobs, maintaining home issues and etc. If they...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...hildren, jobs, maintaining home issues and etc. If they did not achieve related and req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93216080402 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59413441154 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0385395843 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.214285714 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464641759554 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166002229328 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196124458864 0.0737576698707 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305252263843 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188042149346 0.0645574589148 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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