Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
With the skyrocketing development of modern soceity,the environmental issues are becoming increasingly severe.Nearly everyone around the world has some responsibility to cope with this issue.Some people suggest that individuals actually are capable of dealing with environmental issues.However,others hold the idea that environmental issues are too complex for individuals to handle.When it comes to me,I agree with the latter opinion.
Admittedly, the efforts put by each individual could improve the environment to some extent.For instance, picking up litters on the ground,utilizing more public transportation instead of private automobiles, protecting trees in the wild and etc all could help environmental issues.However, I indicate that these kinds of efforts could only function to a small degree.In terms of the complexity of environmental issues,individuals can't cope with them thouroughly.
First of all,since environmental issues always are related to economic benefits of certain parties or companies,individuals' efforts could hardly work in these circumstances.For instance,there is a factory in the southeast of China,which discharges the polluted water directly into the Yellow River without any putrificaion.Although the owner of this factory knows how much damage this would do to the environment, he never wants to import new technology which costs him too much.The citizens in that village who suffer from these problems have talked numerous times with that owner,but there are never any changes.Finally,it is the government that forces this factory putrify poisonous water before emitting.In this case,when environmental issues are concerned with money,individuals seldom make a huge difference for this.
What's more,enviromental issues are always global,which means certain individuals' efforts are too insignificant too completely handle them.Only by the cooperation of countries all over the world can help solve enviromental issue.For instance,if developed countries prohibit the burning of coal or other fossil fuel,but other developing countries in the rest of the world burn hundreds and even thousands tons of gasoline each day, can the global warming get helped to any extent? The whole world is together, only some individuals formidable efforts could be easily wasted if there are a few others continue polluting the environment without any limitation.Another example is about the haze weather.When Beijing has an awful hazy day, the air in Tokyo and Seoul could be negatively impacted.These problems can only be solved by collaboration of three countries.From this perspective, enviromental issues are too global to be solved by individuals.
Based on the discussion above,in spite of the fact that individuals help with environmental problems to some degree,I still suggest those issues are too intricate to be handled by individuals.
With rocketing development of modern society, advances in technology have made it possible for people to live a convenient and colorful life, in which they can have easy access to all the information, commodities, and resources they need. Thus some individuals suppose that people are happier than before, while others hold the opposite idea. From my perspective, I am in favor of the latter one.
Admittedly, living in modern society means people can enjoy benefits brought by technology, such as purchasing goods in another country without stepping out their house, reaching to a far area within several hours by plane. Thus, some people seem to live under the illusion that they equate convenience with happiness. However, they fail to take into account the fact that along with the convenience, more stress appears in our lives, which exerts passive effects on our emotions.
For one thing, increasing work stress have, to some extent, disturbed our normal lives with our families. Nowadays, it is common to see that mothers take their children to go to school, to play. The father, who has to support daily expense, endeavor themselves to work harder and harder, and spend tons of time in their works, in order to provide a pleasant life condition to his kid and wife. The fathers are under great pressure because they cannot afford being fired. Thus, they merely have the access to enjoy the happy time with their families.
Furthermore, people are experience more estrangement recently. People in increasing number have felt that they have few friend that are true friends. The interpersonal relations just collapse over time as the consequence of the development of technology. An illustrating example is that what happens on the way to work. Standing on the subway, it is common that everyone around just look at their cell phone, can low their heads. At times, some old man or lady need a seat, people besides can just ignore this or they merely can see it.
Based on the discussion above, in spite of the convenience from the rapid development of modern society, the pressure along with it just make people less happy. And the disadvantages far outweigh its positive sides and will play a significant role on our lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'besides', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'such as', 'first of all', 'for one thing', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242152466368 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.153587443946 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0908071748879 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560538116592 0.046263068375 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.042600896861 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127802690583 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0358744394619 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.27850153945 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313901345291 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00336322869955 0.00188951952338 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.100896860987 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190582959641 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134529147982 0.0139019557991 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 5113.0 2387.08602151 214% => OK
No of words: 790.0 408.028673835 194% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.47215189873 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.30159774456 4.48200974243 118% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388607594937 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289873417722 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216455696203 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158227848101 0.112833075102 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27850153945 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 409.0 212.727598566 192% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517721518987 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 70.9045780127 59.2087087015 120% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 32.9166666667 20.5533526081 160% => OK
Sentence length SD: 193.414691933 48.84282405 396% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.041666667 120.699889404 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9166666667 20.5533526081 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.791666666667 0.644075263715 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.5376344086 220% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.54480286738 776% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 61.9040084388 45.7405998639 135% => OK
Elegance: 1.60888888889 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315858397817 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122289048565 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100628776435 0.0752933317313 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59296344148 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.236534692467 0.151897553556 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125181278336 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547305891265 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314505228142 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0507302196289 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180565744515 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422751878291 0.0618886996521 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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