Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Whether the people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than the people in the past is a complex and subjective debate. It depends on variety of factors and individual's circumstances. There is no shortage of opinions that people in the past were more satisfied. I have a different belief. I strongly believe that now a days people are way more happy and satisfied. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons in order to support my opinion.
First and foremost, the technological development made a dramatic effect on human life. Now a days, medical sciences is on next level and is well developed. As a result, people now have more cure to the ailments and have higher life expectancy. On the contrary, people in the past did not have good health care and suffered a lot with critical diseases. This can be best explained by my own personal example, when my son was born last year doctors perform different tests on him, as it is now a standard protocol for all newborns, and diagnosed that he has some cardiac issues and start the treatment right away. Thus, if I was not in this time doctors would not be able to diagnose the issue and his treatment would not start in a timely manner.
Secondly, in present days the economic growth has a positive impact on human life . They are more financially stable and can afford good quality life. However, in the past people faced more poverty and have less resources. To add on, people have more opportunities to earn their living with ease. To exemplify, my best friend lost his father in covid and at that time she was in her final year of medical . To made her ends meet she started her online tutoring academy and made handsome amount to run her household without any making any interruption to her studies. Therefore, this example illustrates that if she was in the old times she would not be able to handle the situation in a such a fantastic way.
In conclusion, although some people believe that people in the past were more satisfied and happy. I certainly have a firm believe that advancement in technology made heath care system very efficient and the economic growth also has a positive influence on the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65816326531 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57587080665 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7433930635 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9523809524 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232766432001 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756083867709 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109163776999 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158915786857 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112221790699 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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