Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
It goes without saying that, internet is one of the essential ingredient of everyone's life. Now-a-days we are just a click away from an ocean of information, and this is only because of digital media. In my opinion, I think that internet provides people with a lot of information. I feel this way for the following reasons which I explore in the subsequent essay.
To begin with, internet is most affordable and quick resource to accumulate a bunch of information. To add on, we know that libraries and other information centres are not accessible by everyone, specifically for those living in remote areas. However, internet is approachable to most. To exemplify, when I was working as a travelling Pharmacy technician, sometimes I have to consult pharmacist for any error in the prescribtion. Moreover, I also found quick solutions to drug- drug interactions. This would not have been possible if I donot have acess to internet.
Additionally, online investigative reporting is really beneficial to eradicate corruption in politics. Before we have just few news channels and most of them were either under influence of political pressure or was threatened by high profiles. On the other hand, digital forums are more blunt in their approach as they can't be controlled. For instance, recently the mayor of my county is declared corrupted with evidences collected from social media, as he bribed many officials. Earlier, these politicians have a escape from accountability but because of internet he ended up in giving resign. As a result, it is clear as sky that internet provide people lot of valuable information that helps them in many ways.
In conclusin, I firmly believe that internet have a positive impact on peoples life due to it's pocket friendly and easy access that helps them to accomplish their tasks. Moreover, it also have gather people all around the globe on one platform and helps them to raise their voices to be heard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05590062112 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94245439801 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611801242236 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9008881799 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22334193506 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681348237612 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907758394789 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128372223702 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332572399843 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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