Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
It goes without saying that, internet is one of the essential ingredients of everyone's life. Now-a-days we are just a click away from an ocean of information, and this is only because of digital media. In my opinion, I think that the internet provides people with a lot of information. I feel this way for the following reasons which I explore in the subsequent essay.
To begin with, the internet is the most affordable and quick resource to accumulate a bunch of information. To add on, we know that libraries and other information centres are not accessible by everyone, specifically for those living in remote areas. However, the internet is approachable to most. To exemplify, when I was working as a travelling Pharmacy technician, sometimes I had to consult a pharmacist for any error in the prescribtion. Moreover, I also found quick solutions to drug- drug interactions. This would not have been possible if I donot have acess to internet.
Additionally, online investigative reporting is really beneficial to eradicate corruption in politics. Before we had just a few news channels and most of them were either under influence of political pressure or were threatened by high profiles. On the other hand, digital forums are more blunt in their approach as they can't be controlled. For instance, recently the mayor of my county was declared corrupted with evidence collected from social media, as he bribed many officials. Earlier, these politicians had an escape from accountability but because of the internet he ended up resigning. As a result, it is clear as the sky that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information that helps them in many ways.
In conclusin, I firmly believe that the internet has a positive impact on people's lives due to its pocket friendly and easy access that helps them to accomplish their tasks. Moreover, it also have gather people all around the globe on one platform and helps them to raise their voices to be heard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99096385542 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94739496889 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2068929054 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0555555556 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242020000421 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072280103761 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100718927108 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13474538568 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341603441306 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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