The development of Internet has changed the thinking of the peoples. It is a debatable issue whether the internet provides valuable informaiton or i t creates problem by giving access to the ton of information. In my opinion, I agree with the prior statement, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, in the present generation, because of the availability of internet, people do not need to attend the colledge to get information and learn something new. In fact, information is readily accessible to all people, and we are just a one click away from information. For instance, unlike in past, we don't need to go colledge regularly in order to get education. We can take variety of online classes and comfortably attain knowledge. This also saves alot of time of students and the time saved this way can be spent to gain other skills that are helpful for their career.
Thus, internet has provided important information for the people.
Similarly, Internet also assists us to get news about the world which are quite reliable and almost free. We can get news of the world without costs by surfing various websites, and the information can also be readily believed. For example, in the past, we had a few options of newspapers and we had to pay monthly for those; also the information and news obtained that way could mislead the audience as there were few publications. But now, we have varieties of websites that can be surfed and we can sort the reliable and trusted sources. Without the presence of internet, we would have been unable to know about the present world and that would have badly influence the education sector. By this, the news we get today is free and also believable which is really helpful to get true news about the world.
To recapitulate, internet has provided us with a lot of information which are important and helped to make better condition of people as mentioned above. Therefore, I assert that interned provides ton of crucial information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... from information. For instance, unlike in past, we dont need to go colledge regularly ...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ation. For instance, unlike in past, we dont need to go colledge regularly in order ...
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Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'influenced'.
Suggestion: influenced
...present world and that would have badly influence the education sector. By this, the news...
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Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erefore, I assert that interned provides ton of crucial information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87134502924 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76542652623 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.986156648 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194791758744 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711382075817 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726869624052 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150291190396 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730246021025 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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