Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, among the telecommunication era it is undeniable that internet has a great influence on mankind's life. Although; overusing of anything could results in negative effect, but no one can refute that the internet provides a lot of information for people to help them have a comfortable life. So I totally agree that it provides a lot of valuable information.
There are several reasons that make internet necessary for today’s life. First, it facilitates gathering information through thousands of websites and databases that could be shared and used to analyze and compare for a specific job or subject of a university thesis. For example, decades before when our professors were young, they had to go to the libraries, even different points of the city, read the whole book to find what they need. But now; by using the internet, we can easily search a topic that is our research or thesis topic and scroll between hundreds of result and choose the best fitted on our subject.
Also, such a great technology could be very useful in the health field when a pandemic decease like COVID-19 spreads out and social distancing becomes the most necessary act that everyone most do. In such circumstances, the role of internet and internet based technologies become bold and important. For instance, all meeting, schools and universities classes, shopping and many other daily tasks could be done by using of the internet.
On the other hand, internet causes the decreasing of the environmental pollution by decreasing daily transportation and consequently fewer usage of fuel. For example, people can use the internet based applications for doing tasks like cashing the cheques, paying bills and so on and there is no need to go to the bank for such a commonplace deeds.
Finally, although some of the internet contents could be inappropriate or harmful or even contains a lot of incorrect information, but no one can deny its vital positive effects on human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
.... Although; overusing of anything could results in negative effect, but no one can refu...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... commonplace deeds. Finally, although some of the internet contents could be inappropriat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0490797546 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90641541338 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579754601227 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4303550477 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169922829596 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647276891888 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042370741868 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952789779525 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434458051502 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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