All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Even though there is a popular agreement people take another field to study like businesses, chemistry, art, I have a different opinion. I strongly believe that educational institutions are required to take a history course. I feel this way for 2 reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First and foremost, the most important factor that makes it easier for all students to take this course in first-year seminars and tutorials offer students an opportunity to explore a variety of topics in-depth, consequently, they can learn about the discipline of history, and to improve their research and writing skills.
These history courses are open to all students and are intended to provide a basic understanding of the history of people, countries, and geographic regions over relatively long periods, For instance, when I was in 4th grade I read the historical place and one of them is Mohenjo-Daro, I was always curious to visit over there and one day I decided to go & visited that place, it builds in the 26th-century B.c, the ancient city of Mohenjo-Daro in modern-day Pakistan was one of the largest cities in the Indus Valley civilization, Moreover, I saw a different kind of statue, one was very interesting archeologist the figure as a young girl, her hand or her hip in a half impudent posture and legs slightly forward, This statue looks like enormous & beautiful after this historical place, I came back with a lot of knowledge & also it improved my reading and writing proficiency.
Secondly, the most important factor that makes students to take this history course is to explore different kinds of states that will increase communication skills. As well as, it encourages us to develop a greater multicultural influence with our own communities also each of us has a different experience with the rest of world and by exploring the worldwide. we learn about different cultures with many people. This is best demonstrated by my personal experience. when my cousin in high school the history subject was very compulsory to take, initially he felt very bored with this subject but after some time he loved that subject and he has a very good grasp of that subject. Moreover, he started to write a historical book and one day his book was published in one of best county United States he was very happy that he make a good decision to take a history subject.
In conclusion, I have a firm belief that taking history courses should be obligatory in universities and colleges. this is because it will enhance your knowledgeable skills as well as social perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95622119816 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9218374868 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543778801843 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.533370568 48.9658058833 432% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.461538462 100.406767564 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3846153846 20.6045352989 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194502513677 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753674534107 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854347347887 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124081819037 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521863503134 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 11.7677419355 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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