People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Even though there is a popular agreement that, nowadays people are expanding a lot of time on personal enjoyment and doing fun, I have a different opinion. I strongly agree that, spending my time which is very important for my future life. I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will examine in this essay.
First and foremost, People spend their time on particular things which are very necessary for future goals so they can achieve them. Additionally, students get their best results in academics life. Along with this, they will have a big chance to absorb a sea of knowledge. Furthermore, they will be able to boost their imagination and creativity as well as their focus and attention. Therefore, they will be more organized and as you know that life is a key to success. For instance, when I was in intermediate class i decided to choose a medical career I was very well dedicated to getting an admission to the medical school initially it was very difficult for me to understand and manage things after some time I gradually started to adjust over there and after a while, I like that field. As a result, I succeed to fulfil my dream and everyone was very proud of me.
Secondly, people should do their own things by this way they will improve their health they will do exercise on daily basis. Obviously, if people do exercise on daily basis they are very more active and more healthy, on the other hand, they will stick in one thing and they can do more confidently so they will enhance their skills, for example, my sister wants to be an artist she loves to do paintings, however, my mother she always discouraged her that girls only do the cooking swing cleaning, etc, but she didn't listen to her she always does whatever she like, she was very hardworking she didn't demotivate herself. eventually, my sister got an opportunity in the united state for an art exhibition. and as a result, my mother gave a permission and she was very happy for her.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, you know, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60683760684 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55737325263 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.902502094 48.9658058833 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.5 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 5.45110844103 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283769708332 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868233306007 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107565525401 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182395340464 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073017612228 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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