People today spend too much money on clothing to improve their appearance
In my opinion, most people do not spend too much money on clothes. Some people certainly do spend a lot of money on clothing, but most people don't spend too much.
One reason is that clothing is a necessity rather than a luxury item. People need to wear clothing. In most places people live, the climate makes clothing a necessity for keeping warm or dry or protected from the sun enough to be comfortable. Most people must spend enough money to buy clothing that covers them sufficiently. In addition, there are social standards for wearing clothing that must be met. For example, many businesses will refuse service to people who are not wearing enough clothing. And if anyone tries to walk around without clothing, they generally get in trouble. So, most clothing is bought out of need and meeting needs is not wasteful.
Secondly, the clothing that people do buy beyond what they strictly need is often used to send important social messages. We have sayings like, "the clothes make the man," and "dress for the job you want." People judge others by how they are dressed. We make judgements about a person's job, economic status and even their political beliefs based on the clothes that they wear. In general, this means that spending a lot of money on clothing tends to make a person more well-regarded socially than if they had spent less money. So it is hard to say that a person has spent too much money on clothing without knowing how much social benefit they are getting from the way they are dressed.
So, because people buy clothing out of necessity and because clothing sends social messages which can be very important, I think that most people do not spend too much money on clothing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78859060403 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43443135362 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526845637584 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.892723604 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362273924019 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137839167716 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110261419514 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272305280139 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850360023472 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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