The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake’s water
The reading and lecture discuss the ways used to decrease the salinity of water in salton see which is in inland lake. the reading gives these three methods. however, the lecture dispute that it's not a great idea maybe it would be realistic and practical desalination would present a serious problem that dissolves in the water.
First of all, the reading article claims that it is the direct removal of salt from the lake's water in special desalination facilities. while, the speaker notes that it causes a serious problem there is other types of chemical which is very toxic it will harm people's health by saying solid material that lives behind toxic like selenium may be people inhale that it will affect their health.
Secondly, the reading passage states that dilute the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean. on the other hand, the professor points out that required building pipelines and canals. these major constructions require huge financial resources and will be expensive as the ocean is 100 kilometers away.
Finally, the reading text suggests that it would be to control the salinity of the lake by constructing walls to divide the lake into several sections. in contrast, the divide the section unlike to work as long sometimes intense. For instance, an earthquake will cause a collapse of walls and later it will be remixed again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ter in special desalination facilities. while, the speaker notes that it causes a se...
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Suggestion:
... special desalination facilities. while, the speaker notes that it causes a serio...
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... notes that it causes a serious problem there is other types of chemical which is very toxic it will...
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... in the lake with water from the ocean. on the other hand, the professor points ou...
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...required building pipelines and canals. these major constructions require huge financ...
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... divide the lake into several sections. in contrast, the divide the section unlik...
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Suggestion:
...lake into several sections. in contrast, the divide the section unlike to work as...
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'long'.
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...he divide the section unlike to work as long sometimes intense. For instance, an earthquake wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99111111111 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45232668559 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9049192827 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06452816374 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0489547110052 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225365950158 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514953031965 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0292380879911 0.162205337803 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336323294216 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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