The world is at proliteration along with the technology and people's living standard's are increasing dramatically. Demand for better quality of goods and services has become one of the latest trends. Although, it depend on individual's opinion to support or oppose the statement that the rapidly changing of world has create people less happy with their lives than in the past. I personally support the idea and this essay will explain why.
First, in this present era, people are unhappy with their life because of living standard of people. Nowadays, people's have become too much dependent on technology which has replaced some precise work and the products are becoming more expensive in the market. Due to it, people's tend to seek better facilities in the area which has lead to financial problem in the household. For example, in the past, our grandparents were happy and satisfied with what they have. Conversely, in this contemporary world, living standards has gone up and people prefer to better job and want to have comfortable life without having any problem. Consequentl, it has lead to unsatisfaction with their life when they choose to have peaceful life.
Second, it is mainly because of the shortage of job available in the market. While number of students graduates are adding up year by year and there is less job opportunities the market. When it is not going according to plan, univertsity pass out are not happy and eventually lead to dissatisfied with their life. For example, most of my friend's are unemployed however, i manage to get job at one of the private company. In this case, my friend's are tried for hunting for job to lead better life. Thus, they are not very happy with their living and it has made more dauanting to survive in this world. Beside having job, i am not satisfied with my income as well because source of income is not able to meet the life i have expected for. As result, due to rapid changing of world, people tend to be more unsatisfied and unhappy with their life than in the past.
In conclusion, i literally feel that people are not happy with their life due to spontaneous changing of world because the living standards has increase and the job opportunities is limited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rvive in this world. Beside having job, i am not satisfied with my income as well...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83028720627 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6192297426 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469973890339 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3815965718 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3684210526 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372538175544 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122463413896 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115734303277 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270997041935 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432808844155 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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