Education plays a significant role in the contemporary world and every children go to school to get good education. While some may think that educating kids is a more challenging than before. In my opinion, it has become more easier than last few decades and this essay will explain why.
One of the reasons for my position is children's are having basic knowledge. Although, it is true that, nowadays, children are becoming more addicted to mobile phones, online games and other social media such as Facebook and Instagram. Conversely, preschool children's usually learn and gain basic knowledge like English and simple math. Unlike today, in the past, children's hardly knows how to speak English and they were quite introvert person. For instance, my mother told me that during her days they did not get a chance to use electronic gadget nor to speak other language beside their mother tough. But at present, children's do not face a daunting's when they go to school. As a result, it has made more essay for teacher to impart knowledge to children than in the past.
Another reason is the intelligence of children. Although, children's are more active to phone, social media and online games, they are more brilliant than before. It is mainly because they are more expose to advance technology and access to better facilities' like better infrastructure, which has made teacher to teach without having difficulties. For example, my niece, she is just three years old and she can speak English language and when I teach her alphabets, she can catch up easily which mean twenty first generation are proved to be more brighter than in the past. Consequently, the use of mobile phone has enhance their knowledge and skills where it has made less difficult to assist the children.
In conclusion, due to spending more time in mobile phone, children's has become very easy to teach because preschool children get basic knowledge and also children's are more intelligent than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... less difficult to assist the children. In conclusion, due to spending more time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00303030303 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59406860341 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548484848485 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5273360463 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25885473796 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911473410113 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520873211952 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164656260452 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356150124982 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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