being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary.
Nowadays, there are various kinds of jobs in every society for a worker to do. Undoubtedly, every person should decide what kinds of the job he or she like to do. With this in mind, a controversial question exists whether people should do the job which satisfies themselves. While some argue that it is recommended to have a job with a high salary, others believe otherwise saying that being happy is more important. I, for one, subscribe to the latter group on accounts of many reasons, two substantial of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, if people do a certain job which makes them happier, they could reduce and relieve their stress. When seeking stress relievers, many people turn to jobs which satisfy them. job satisfaction is one of the most pivotal concerns that every individual before commencing a job must consider. people who work in a friendly environment can have a calm life. Therefore their performance will increase effectively. By reducing the stress in a friendly work environment, the worker will have mental and physical health in their life.
Secondly, workers who do whatever tasks they want, have more willing to promote in their jobs. if a worker interests to do a job in a company, he or she makes lots of endeavors to do it very well. By doing so, this worker does his or her best and finally receives a better salary compared to workers who do not like their jobs so that they have no motivation to do their jobs. In other words, the more motivation to do a job, the more promotion in their job, and eventually the more money the workers the earn.
In summary, by taking into account all the above-mentioned reasons, being happy with job leads to the advancement in the work also reduce the stress in the work environment. If a worker has a healthy mind and body performs tasks properly and then will have a better salary as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in summary, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70392749245 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6437203192 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522658610272 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6048686537 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5882352941 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268433449672 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09352627249 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10323786906 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171894410677 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590921760868 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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