The best way to travel is in a group led by a guide. Do you agree or disagree?
In today’s societies there are a few restricted ways through which people can spend their free time and enjoy their lives. As one of the most favorable ones, people all over the world prefer to take a trip in their holidays. A person can just travel by him/herself or attend a group during this experience. But how can one feasibly make his/her trip to a more profitable one with a noticeable number of distinctive features? I firmly contend that taking a trip under the supervision of a guide can provide each person with a host of advantages. No wonder that some of these advantages are so crucial that nobody should pass by them easily. Through the following three paragraphs, some persuasive reasons will substantiate my point of view clearly.
As the most significant reason, not only can a tour guide provide the travelers with some professional information about the places they are already visiting, but he/she can also feasibly introduce them to some new places or features that they do not at all notice as prominent ones. It has been well proven that in most conditions people do not know sufficient information about their journey destination before taking a trip. Although in some cases some enthusiastic people try to know their destination by gathering information about them via books, magazines or the internet, unfortunately they mostly miss a host of regarded details as they are not professional ones.
Besides, as all certificated tour leaders are somehow capable of handling risky situations, in some occasions, it seems pretty wise to take a trip under their supervision. While taking an adventure to an unknown place with a lot of unknown hazards associated with it, you should have a proficient person helping you out dealing with dangerous conditions you have already faced or anticipating drawbacks you may run into further.
More than having a proficient guide, travelling with a tour among a group of other people will bring travelers memorable and marvelous moments too. Enjoying a trip besides having the company of some other people definitely seems a better choice to anyone. Whether you are visiting a historical place in an ancient country or having an adventure to a deep, dark and hazardous point of a tropical jungle, you can share a lot of communal activities with others. Some of these activities however are conspicuously necessary in some cases.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, it can be concluded indisputably that the best way to travel is in a group led by a guide. Though taking a trip can render a huge number of profits itself, there are some other related substantial facets which people should consider seriously trying to turn their journey to a more favorable one. There is no doubt that in most cases people can effectively make goals of their journey by traveling under the supervision of a proficient leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ails as they are not professional ones. Besides, as all certificated tour leader...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, no doubt, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2417.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02494802495 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84162701191 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503118503119 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 774.9 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0511773909 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.210526316 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3157894737 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144039343104 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480028274516 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775986887688 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877493695991 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448589939 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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