People nowadays are busy coping with numerous works continuing adding to their stress. There is an opinion that the best way to relax oneself and release pressure truly is to spend time alone. For me, I totally concur with this notion.
To start with, spending time alone allows people to escape from the noisy world for a moment. In today's society, people are overwhelmed by the insurmountable works and relationships they need to deal with, causing unnecessary stress. If they are left alone in a relatively quiet environment, they will have the time to fully relax themselves and do whatever they want. Take me as an example. I would love to travel alone instead of going out with a group of friends in my spare time since it allows me to be more absorbed in all kinds of amazing sceneries. More importantly, I can go to any place I want without considering others' opinions. In general, spending time alone for relaxation allows one to be good to themselves.
In the second place, it is better for people to enjoy their time alone because they have more time to think deeply. People may speak a lot with other people but have little time to think. But when they are left alone, thinking will become dominant in their lives, for there is no one they can talk to. This ensures people time to reflect and reconsider their lives in a relaxing mode, which may help them reduce stress effectively. For instance, one may have just been through a difficult time in his business and loses a considerable amount of money. He sits beside the river alone and wants to commit suicide. But after thinking for a long time, he finally regains the value of life and opposes his previous thought. This was a true story happening in my city just a few weeks ago. His initial thought might have killed him if the man did not calm down.
In conclusion, I restate the notion that it is best to spend time alone to truly relax and reduce stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a relaxing mode" with adverb for "relaxing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to start with, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58092485549 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42061469922 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563583815029 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8485967213 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307414337764 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10221444856 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140203825348 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28441039797 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172021744838 0.0645574589148 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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